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Ask me

ask me for the sun
ask me for the moon
ask me for the stars
but do not ask me for my love

ask me for a smile
ask me for a hug
ask me for a kiss
but do not ask me for my love

ask me for my thoughts
ask me for my time
ask me for anything at all
but do not ask me for my love

do not ask me for my love
for it has been yours all along
ever since the day we first met
there will never be a need
to ask
©2008-2009 ~Coren89
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wrote this for my girlfriend after getting the idea when i woke up...

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:iconpippin1178:
Some of the best ideas are in that small glimmer of sanity between sleeping and awake before the mind remembers its limitations. :)

wow, I just waxed all philisophical. Wait a minute, lemme right that one down :) :lmao:

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"Imagination is more important than knowledge."
Albert Einstein
:iconcoren89:
right you are :)

so you liked it, then?

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Love is not quite profound enough a word to describe my feelings for you, Pam

Give my profile a visit sometime...
:iconpippin1178:
Yeah :) Sorry if I did not make that clear hehe

I liked it.

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"Imagination is more important than knowledge."
Albert Einstein
:iconcoren89:
*happy smile*

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Love is not quite profound enough a word to describe my feelings for you, Pam

Give my profile a visit sometime...
:iconseriko-chan:
This is quiet wonderful! *-*
I'd be truly happy if someone had wrote that for me x3
Your girlfriend must be very special to you ^^
:iconcoren89:
that's something she certainly is :)
she too seemed very happy with it ^^
thanks a lot for the :+fav:, by the way :D

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Love is not quite profound enough a word to describe my feelings for you, Pam

Give my profile a visit sometime...
:iconseriko-chan:
that's nice to hear ^^
you're welcome x3
:iconcoren89:
Since i met her, she always seems to have inspired me to write things...
This is the first time it has actually produced a poem, though. The rest were pretty much just short scraps of text ([link])
...

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Love is not quite profound enough a word to describe my feelings for you, Pam

Give my profile a visit sometime...

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